homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, my dear!
Your answer made me smile.
It\'s great how you can already give such a wise and wonderful advise at a young age.
See you tonight!
T. Amanda :)
HOMEWORK:
What advice would you give to someone half your age? Please explain your answer.
When you play outside, do not go to the dangerous place.
>> When you play outside, do not go anywhere dangerous.
And go to the bed ealry. If you do what I say, you will get cookies.
>> And go to bed early. If you do as I say, you will get cookies.
>> OR: Whenever you play outside, do not go anywhere dangerous. And please go to the bed early every night. If you do all that, you will get cookies.
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