homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition today! It\'s really nice that you are learning two foreign languages and you\'re doing well in both. I hope you\'ll never give up on them. Good luck!^^
T. JanE ^^
I would like to go to Spain again if i have a holiday around month.
>> I would like to go to Spain again if I have a holiday for a month.
Last time i visited there, i had a great time in there.
>> I had a great time there during my last visit.
I was fascinated by its culture, language and people.
>> Correct
So I\'m studying Spalinsh language for preparing to travel to Spain again.
>> I\'m studying Spanish language to prepare for my travel to Spain again.
Nest time visiting there, i will swim on the sea of Nerja, Spain.
>> On my next visit, I will swim on the sea of Nerja, Spain.
I\'m so regretful that i wasn\'t enjoyed that beautiful sea cause of phobia about water.
>> I regret not enjoying that beautiful sea because of my water phobia.
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