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2017-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I would like to go to Spain again if i have a holiday around month. Last time i visited there, i had a great time in there. I was fascinated by its culture, language and peole. So I'm studying Spalinsh language for preparing to travel to Spain again. Nest time visiting there, i will swim on the sea of Nerja, Spain. I'm so regretful that i wasn't enjoyed that beautiful sea cause of phobia about water.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! It\'s really nice that you are learning two foreign languages and you\'re doing well in both. I hope you\'ll never give up on them. Good luck!^^

T. JanE ^^

I would like to go to Spain again if i have a holiday around month.

>> I would like to go to Spain again if I have a holiday for a month. 

Last time i visited there, i had a great time in there.

>> I had a great time there during my last visit. 

I was fascinated by its culture, language and people.

>> Correct

So I\'m studying Spalinsh language for preparing to travel to Spain again.

>> I\'m studying Spanish language to prepare for my travel to Spain again. 

Nest time visiting there, i will swim on the sea of Nerja, Spain.

>> On my next visit, I will swim on the sea of Nerja, Spain. 

I\'m so regretful that i wasn\'t enjoyed that beautiful sea cause of phobia about water.

>> I regret not enjoying that beautiful sea because of my water phobia. 

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