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Hi [이름]! I super miss our daily conversation TT
Not hearing your voice seems strange!
Anyways, thanks for your concern! Get well soon!
Drink lots of fluid and take plenty of rest!
I cannot wait to hear your voice again! See you!
Usually, girsl tend to choose arts while boys select science in schools and universities.
>>Usually, girls tend to choose arts while boys select science in schools and universities.
This trend is because of our society\'s atmosphere.
>>CORRECT!
There have been a lot of sexual discrimination in our society.
>>CORRECT!
That is ,because science is very difficult, girls might not be good at it.
>>CORRECT!
While, many people have said boys can feel difficult to arts because they don\'t like to stay one place for a long time.
>>Many people have said boys can feel difficulty studying arts because they don\'t like to stay in one place for a long time.
But, I think it is wrong thinking and this trend should be changed.
>> But, I think it is a wrong thought and this trend should be changed.
Each person has a different abilitiy and personality.
>> Each person has a different ability and personality.
Therefore we have to know our own personality and ability and then should choose a major properly.
>>Therefore we have to know our own personality and ability and then we could choose a major properly.
Hi teacher!
>>CORRECT!
Now I have just one class.
>> Now I just have one class.
But I have caught a cold severly and I am busy these days becuase I work again.
>>Now I just have one class, but I have caught a severe cold, and I am busy these days because I work again.
After my health becomes in good condition, l will start the phone calling.
>>After my health becomes better, I will start having our phone class again.
Rose~ be careful of cold and see you later. Have a good weekend^^
>>Rose~ be careful not to catch a cold and see you later. Have a good weekend^^
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