homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the importance in having a goal is that you can get through hard times when you have something to look forward to. Having a goal gives you a reason for doing everything that you need to achieve the goal. Having a goal can also make you happy in the end. You'll be proud of yourself for working hard and meeting the goal at the end.
강사 첨삭
Have some goals and keep working to achieve them!
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~Teacher Shanee^^,
I think the importance in having a goal is that you can get through hard times when you have something to look forward to.
>>> Correct!
Having a goal gives you a reason for doing everything that you need to achieve the goal.
>>> Your goals motivate you to focus on the things you have to do in order to achieve something.
Having a goal can also make you happy in the end.
>>> Correct!
You\'ll be proud of yourself for working hard and meeting the goal at the end.
>>> Correct!
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