homework

2017-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: ESSAY WRITING: Directions: Explain the proverb based from your own understanding using complete sentences not more than 10. Proverb: Little by little, a person can get very far. -Peruvian When we start something at first time, anyone can't do well. But you don't give up and keep going. You will do well! I think it is the this sentence of meaning that don't give up and constantly make a effort, you can do well later. Now I am not fluent in English, so sometime I want to give up and stop study. But I turth this sentence! If I endure this period, will be a fluent English speaker later.

강사 첨삭

Bonjour, Anne^^

How was your weekend?

I hope that you had fun with your friends.

Thank you for taking time again to do your homework.

You are really doing a great job. Keep up^^.

~ T. Lorna^^

When we start something at first time, anyone can\'t do well.

>> Everything is not always easy at first.

OR:
>> If we do something at first, it is not always easy for us.

But you don\'t give up and keep going. You will do well!
>> But if we don\'t give up and instead we keep going, we will surely do well at the end!
I think it is the this sentence of meaning that don\'t give up and constantly make a effort, you can do well later.
>> I think this is the meaning of this proverb that we shouldn\'t give up easily but rather make an effort and reap the good result later.
Now I am not fluent in English, so sometime I want to give up and stop study. But I turth this sentence! If I endure this period, will be a fluent English speaker later.

>> It\'s just like me who isn\'t fluent in English now so sometimes I want to give up studying but I trust this proverb that\'s why I would endure studying because I know that I can be fluent in English later.

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