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2017-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Name two things that you like about yourself. Please explain your answer. I like my face, because I am handsome. I like my brain, my brain is so creative.

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Name two things that you like about yourself. Please explain your answer.

I like my face, because I am handsome. I like my brain, my brain is so creative.

>>I like my face because I am handsome. I like my brain. My brain is so creative.



>> BETTER:

There are many things that I like about myself, but there are two things that I like the most.

First, I like my face because modesty aside, I am handsome.

Second, I like my brain. Not to brag but I do have a creative mind.

I\'m aware that not many people are blessed enough to have what I have, so I will make sure to use what I have

not just for my own interest, but for the interest of other people.

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