Homework

Hi there [이름]! ^_^

Thank you for giving some time to answer our homework.

I always love reading about your opinions.

I think many young people nowadays don\'t know how to use the smartphone and the internet to their advantage.

The smartphones and internet are great learning tools but you need to know how to use it.

I think that\'s the reason why the younger generation is having a hard time learning.

The older generation insists on using the old  method and neglects the advancement in technology.

That\'s just how I see it.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry :)

In Korea, old generation often says current young generation is the most stupid on this Han peninsula.

>> In Korea, the older generation often says that the current generation is the most stupid generation in the Han peninsula.

According to them, the axis of evil making young Koreans become stupid is mainly cellphone and the Internet.

>> According to them, the axis of evil that made young Koreans become stupid are mainly the cellphone and the Internet.

People use shortened words to communicate fast and efficiently through the Internet and cellphones.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> People nowadays use shortened words to communicate fast and efficiently through the Internet and cellphones.

I often feel that I also seeks articles edited in simply way and prefer to express my opinion briefly.

>> I often feel that I also seek articles that are edited in a simple way and I prefer to express my opinion briefly.

If I get used to this instant and short term communication too much, then I would lose my ability to think deeply and communicate with a long time.

>> If I get used to this instant and short term communication too much, then I would lose my ability to think deeply and communicate for a long time.

However I don\'t think this phenomenon will simply make people learn less.

>> However, I don\'t think this phenomenon will simply make people learn less.

I think the way of thinking and dealing with information are changed.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> >> I think the way of thinking and dealing with information have changed.

Now a days, skills for searching information in fast and accurate way are sometimes more useful than memorizing knowledge.

>> Nowadays, skills for searching information in a fast and accurate way are sometimes more useful than memorizing knowledge.

Young generation might not study in old ways and it could be seen they don\'t learn much like before.

>> Young generation might not study using the old ways and it could be seen that they don\'t learn much like before.

However they might learn different kind of things.
>> However, they might learn different kinds of things.