Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday Ms. [Name]! Thank you for your time and effort in answering your homework.
I appreciate your answers. You based your answer from your experiences. I know because
you like buying products online. I made necessary corrections on your sentences. Check it out. :-)
-- Teacher May
Advantage of online shopping is that people can buy products cheaper.
>> The advantage of online shopping is that people can buy cheaper products.
And people do not need to carry heavy products to houses because of delivery service.
>> They do not need to bring home the heavy products because there is a delivery service.
But we can not see the product in person so we may buy wrong products.
>> We can\'t see the actual product so we might get the product with defects.
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