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Hurrah! You are back on track. Thank you for squeezing this into your hectic schedule, James. Thank you for making me proud.
Just let it out. I am here to absorb it. I wish I could help you with your tasks there, but I know that you can manage.
Besides, you got a very supportive team. Just say the word and they will be more than willing to give you a hand. Also, that\'s their job.
It must have been a surprise for you but your colleagues must be eyeing on you the whole time to be the next leader.
Carry on with it, James.
And of course, if you can, spend some personal time.
All the best!
-Klein-
What are the things that have happened out of the blue recently?
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As you know, I became a team leader of this team on July 1st.
>>As you know, I became the leader of this team on July 1st.
After that my life in the company was changed.
>>Correct
OR >> After that, my life in the company has changed.
I have to participate in the many meetings and I have to check many works what my team members did.
>>I have to participate in many meetings and check much work that my team members did.
And I have to consider the vision of my team, and I have to prepare what to do next year.
>>Also, I have to consider the vision of my team and prepare what to do next year.
Sometimes I am at the company on weekends for a work.
>>Sometimes, I stay at the company on weekends for work.
Because of that, I don\'t make times for myself.
>>Because of that, I don\'t make time for myself.
In order to make times on weekends, I have to stay late at the company.
>>In order to make time on weekends, I have to stay late at the company.
My life is changed out of the blue after on July 1st.
>>My life has changed out of the blue after July 1st.
I am always very tired and I want to take a rest.
>>Correct
So I will wake up late on this Saturday and I will eat brunch and enjoy my weekend.
>>So, I will wake up late this Saturday, eat brunch, and enjoy my weekend.
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