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2017-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hello what a wonderful day ! you know spring is just around the corner in Australia. i mean spring is in the air . the weather in Australia is getting warmer . now step by step the people don`t wear a coat and Jumper Yesterday , it wasn`t quite busy as i expected . and it was very comfortable working with indonesians guys . sometimes if i work with vietnam person , It`s uncomfortable because he`s very stubborn like Donald Trump. He`s nice person personally but he`s not good as working person.. I understand his siuation and i know he`s hard worker but there`s a little bit anyway That`s shame some kind of things. all good and that`s for today HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: What were the most stressful periods of your life? Even though he can do himself ,When he leaves me with the uncomfortable work to do , i used to be stressful. and...umm...nothing i`m the man who avoided stress well . i forget about it that received stress quickly

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good afternoon! ^^


Don\'t be too stressed at work.

I know it can really be a bit tiring and stressful working with people

who are difficult to work with. :)

But you can do it. You have always been a very optimistic person. :)


T. Glenda


Hello what a wonderful day !

you know spring is just around the corner in Australia. 

>> Spring is just around the corner here in Australia.

 i mean spring is in the air . the weather in Australia is getting warmer . now step by step the people don`t wear a coat and Jumper 

>> I mean spring is in the air because the weather is getting warmer. People don\'t wear coats and jumper anymore.
 Yesterday , it wasn`t quite busy as i expected .

>> Correct

or

>>> Yesterday wasn\'t quite busy as I expected.

and it was very comfortable working with indonesians guys . sometimes if i work with vietnam person ,
It`s uncomfortable because he`s very stubborn like Donald Trump. 

>> It was very comfortable working with Indonesian guys. Sometimes, If I work with Vietnamese, it\'s a bit uncomfortable because he is very stubborn like Donald Trump.
 He`s nice person personally but he`s not good as working person..

>> He has a nice personality but he\'s not good as a colleague.
 I understand his siuation and i know he`s hard worker but there`s a little bit anyway That`s shame some kind of things. all good and that`s for today
>> I can understand his situation and I know that he is just working hard but there\'s just a bit...Anyway there are some shameful things.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY:
What were the most stressful periods of your life?

Even though he can do himself ,When he leaves me with the uncomfortable work to do , i used to be stressful. and...umm...nothing i`m the man who avoided stress well . i forget about it that received stress quickly

>>Even though he can it himself, he leaves me with uncomfortable things to do. So, it\'s a bit stressful. I\'m a man who avoids to be stressed so I tend to forget it quickly.

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