Homework

2017-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Directions: Complete the following sentences. 1. Studying in South Korea is unfair and expensive because of private education, so the rich people are the better for it. 2. I want to become a travel essayist in the future so that I can travel around the world! 3. My friend's mother is a an elementary school teacher and her father is a university professor. 4. I like to go to the beach to enjoy swimming in the sea during summer vacation. 5. He is a good hasband to me and a good father to our children. 6. My dream is to become a adventurer but I also want to become a poet.

강사 첨삭

Hey there, Jenny^^.
How are you doing today? 
I hope that you are just having a great time over there.
Thank you for taking time to do your homework. Keep up!

~. T. Lorna^-^

1. Studying in South Korea is unfair and expensive because of private education, so the rich people are the better for it.
>> Studying in South Korea is unfair and expensive because of private education wherein it\'s only those who are rich that has the opportunity to enjoy it.
>> Correct!
3. My friend\'s mother is a an elementary school teacher and her father is a university professor.
>> My friend\'s mother is an elementary school teacher and her father is a university professor.
4. I like to go to the beach to enjoy swimming in the sea during summer vacation.
>> Correct!
5. He is a good hasband to me and a good father to our children.
>> He is a good husband to me and a good father to our children.
6. My dream is to become a adventurer but I also want to become a poet.
>> My dream is to become an adventurer not only that, I also want to become a poet.

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