homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your favorite piece of accessory.
Anyway, please go over my corrections.^^
Have a great day!
~t. Kelly^^
Essay: What’s your favorite item of clothing?
First,my favorite clothing is cap.
>> My favorite accessory is cap.
The cap can protect the head by sun.
>> A cap can protect the head from the sun.
And, the cap shows great or nice.
>> And, a cap looks great or nice.
The man who put on the caps look like nice and neat.
>> A man who wears a cap looks good and neat.
The caps can ward off cold.
>> A cap can ward off cold.
So, caps do many things to people.
>> Correct.
But I don\'t have these cap.
>> But, I don\'t have caps.
So, I want to buy these cap.
>> So, I want to buy caps.
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