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2017-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Essay: What’s your favorite item of clothing? First,my favorite clothing is cap. The cap can protect the head by sun. And, the cap shows great or nice. The man who put on the caps look like nice and neat. The caps can ward off cold. So, caps do many things to people. But I don't have these cap. So, I want to buy these cap.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your favorite piece of accessory.

Anyway, please go over my corrections.^^

Have a great day!

~t. Kelly^^

Essay: What’s your favorite item of clothing?
First,my favorite clothing is cap.

>> My favorite accessory is cap.
The cap can protect the head by sun.

>> A cap can protect the head from the sun.
 And, the cap shows great or nice.

>> And, a cap looks great or nice.
The man who put on the caps look like nice and neat.

>> A man who wears a cap looks good and neat.
The caps can ward off cold.

>> A cap can ward off cold.
So, caps do many things to people.

>> Correct.
But I don\'t have these cap.

>> But, I don\'t have caps.
So, I want to buy these cap.

>> So, I want to buy caps.

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