homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!
Thank you for taking time to answer the homework I gave you. Please study my corrections. Don\'t be afraid to commit mistakes because we elarn from them. Just make sure to learn from them.^^
~Kelly^^
What is more important to you, safety or convenience? Answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
Safety important because i take care of kids.
>> Safety is important because I take care of kids.
I have to take by rules when children slides,siso,swing.
>> I have to follow the rules when children play and enjoy on slides and swings.
Satety is directly connected to the accident.
>> Did you mean: Safety is important to avoid accidents.
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