Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
I appreciate your time sharing your everyday activity and your ideas about our topic.
I appreciate you sharing about this aspect of your culture.
It truly is something to be proud of.
It is a strong foundation of one nation. :)
I hope that the next generation will get to appreciate and embrace this about our culture.
T. Glenda
Hello How are you? :) strangely yesterday wasn`t busy but i had feel like it was busy so i told my co-worker to be busier than yesterday however he said to me \" No [이름] yesterday was more busy! come and see the docket
>> Yesterday, it was strange that it wasn\'t busy but I felt like it was so busy. So, I told my co-worker to be busier than yesterday. However, he told me, \'No, [이름] yesterday was busier! come and see the docket.
It could feel like it`s busy or you`re tired or you work too hard hahaha\"
>> It feels like it\'s busy or maybe you\'re tired or you are working too hard.
Anyway it was weird today
>> Correct
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY:
What is about your culture that you are most proud of?
There are a lot of proud culture in korea !
>> There are a lot of things to be proud of about our Korean culture.
but most of all i think [이름]chi and hangeul are the best.
>> But most of all, I think [이름]chi and Hangeul are the best.
when i first came in Austraila , i couldn`t imagine there is [이름]chi in local restaurant but in my restaurant , they were selling the [이름]chi .
>> When I first came to Australia, I wasn\'t expecting that there is [이름]chi in local restaurants, but in my restaurant, they are selling [이름]chi.
they know it and eat it [이름]chi is scientifically proven to help digestion and it made by salted cabbage with red pepper ,radish and ingrediants...
>> They know that eating [이름]chi is scientifically proven to help digestion and it is made of salted cabbage with red pepper, radish and other ingredients.
Hangeul is the most scientific writing system in the world and no one knows who made each of language but hangeul exists the only one who made
>> Hangeul is the most scientific writing system in the world and no one knows who made each of the language but hangeul exists because of the only one who made it.
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