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2017-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

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Hi! Teacher Rain I have a niece. She is four year old. Her name is heewon. She is very cute. Her appearance look like me. We are like mother and daugher. I really love her. And I miss her. 1. To put two and two together I answered to put two and two together. 2. two's company, three's a crowd We don't with Amy, two's company three's a crowd. 3. Forty winks I forty winks in my office because i do not sleep well at night.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

Me too I have three nieces. They are really cute and witty. So I love spending time with them.

They are all girls so they are so lovable. 

Please review my corrections Ms. [이름]!

Call you then tomorrow! ^^

~Teacher Rain~
 I have a niece. She is four year old. Her name is heewon. 

>> CORRECT
 She is very cute. 

>> CORRECT
 Her appearance look like me. We are like mother and daugher.

>> Her appearance looks like me. We are like mother and daughter.
 I really love her. And I miss her.
1. To put two and two together
I answered to put two and two together.
>> DID YOU MEAN: I put two and two together when I answered.
2. two\'s company, three\'s a crowd
We don\'t with Amy, two\'s company three\'s a crowd.
>> We don\'t like to be with Amy,
two\'s company three\'s a crowd.
3. Forty winks
I forty winks in my office because i do not sleep well at night.

>> I had forty winks in my office, because I didn\'t sleep well last night

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