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The will to succeed is important, but what's more important is the will to prepare.
I think, all of the results are decided when you start. More likely to make business model perfect and complete is charge half in business, preparing is even more important than you think. especially, if I wanna get a high score at exam, I should know how important to prepare. I should have a not only the will to get a high score but also the effort to study hard. All of people can have the will to succeed, but it is difficult to do a action. The meaning of preparing is to make the condition perfect. That's why to prepare is put a action into a real situation. The will to succeed is nothing without a action.
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>> I think that in everything that we want to do, we can always foresee the result from the beginning.
More likely to make business model perfect and complete is charge half in business,
>> It is just like when we want to make a perfect business, we can already foreknow that we need to spend a lot.
preparing is even more important than you think. especially, if I wanna get a high score at exam, I should know how important to prepare.
>> Preparing is very important than what we think especially if we want to get a high score at an exam then we should know how to prepare in order for us to get what we want.
I should have a not only the will to get a high score but also the effort to study hard.
>> We shouldn\'t have only the will to get a high score but also the will to study hard.
All of people can have the will to succeed, but it is difficult to do a action.
>> All people wants to be successful but it is difficult for them to work hard for this certain goal.
The meaning of preparing is to make the condition perfect.
>> The meaning of preparing is to condition ourselves towards perfection.
That\'s why to prepare is put a action into a real situation.
>> That\'s why for us to be prepared means we have to act and do something really.
The will to succeed is nothing without a action.
>> The will to succeed is nothing without an action to reach it.
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