homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday [이름]!
I hope you can have more vacations with your family.
Rest well this weekend and regain your strength. See you on Monday!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I think that if you take family vacations that everyone enjoys, it can improve family relationship.
>>> Correct!
It will become one of the good memories that you had with your family, and you\'ll look back at the vacations you took and smile to yourself.
>>> Correct!
I think it can also help you understand your family.
>>> Correct!
If you have siblings, and you fought with them, you might give them a chance to hear them out with clearer mind and better mood.
>>> If you have siblings and you fought with them, you might give it a try to hear them out with a clearer and a better mood.
Taking vacations with your family will make you share your thoughts that you never have thought of sharing before.
>>> Correct!
Sharing thoughts makes your family relationships closer than how it was before you did it.
>>> Correct!
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