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2017-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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When I went to Thailand with my girlfriend, I met interesting people. I met a couple run the restaurant. The restaurant was near our hotel. Wife of the couple cooked many food. Her food was very very very delicious than other food I had ate while traveling in Thailand because she had worded as a cook in the hotel. So I went to the restaurant everyday while I was in that location. Then they welcome every time and We talked a lot. Even they delivery food to our hotel. Thus We became friendly and We promised to meet If I visit again in Thailand.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I hope you are having a good day!

Anyway, it\'s a blessing to meet good people during your travel.

I hope you continue to have a good relationship with those people.

See you on Monday!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


When I went to Thailand with my girlfriend, I met interesting people.

>>> Correct!

I met a couple run the restaurant.

>>> I met a couple running a restaurant.

The restaurant was near our hotel.

>>> Correct!

Wife of the couple cooked many food.

>>> The wife cooked a lot of food.

Her food was very very very delicious than other food I had ate while traveling in Thailand because she had worded as a cook in the hotel.

>>> Her food was a lot delicious than the other food I had eaten while traveling in Thailand because she had worked as a cook in a hotel.

So I went to the restaurant everyday while I was in that location.

>>> So I went to the restaurant every day while I was in that location.

Then they welcome every time and We talked a lot.

>>> They warmly welcomed us and we talked a lot every time we visited there.

Even they delivery food to our hotel.

>>> They even delivered food to our hotel.

Thus We became friendly and We promised to meet If I visit again in Thailand.

>>> Thus, we became friends and we promised to meet if I visit in Thailand again.

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