Homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I hope you are having a good day!
Anyway, it\'s a blessing to meet good people during your travel.
I hope you continue to have a good relationship with those people.
See you on Monday!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
When I went to Thailand with my girlfriend, I met interesting people.
>>> Correct!
I met a couple run the restaurant.
>>> I met a couple running a restaurant.
The restaurant was near our hotel.
>>> Correct!
Wife of the couple cooked many food.
>>> The wife cooked a lot of food.
Her food was very very very delicious than other food I had ate while traveling in Thailand because she had worded as a cook in the hotel.
>>> Her food was a lot delicious than the other food I had eaten while traveling in Thailand because she had worked as a cook in a hotel.
So I went to the restaurant everyday while I was in that location.
>>> So I went to the restaurant every day while I was in that location.
Then they welcome every time and We talked a lot.
>>> They warmly welcomed us and we talked a lot every time we visited there.
Even they delivery food to our hotel.
>>> They even delivered food to our hotel.
Thus We became friendly and We promised to meet If I visit again in Thailand.
>>> Thus, we became friends and we promised to meet if I visit in Thailand again.
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