Homework!

2017-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

I would like to get a job in this year. It is hard to get a job in Korean. So many young people who graduate student build qualification for a job. There are so many qualification for a job. Many company want me to have ability of technique, English or language of anther country, experience whether there is relation to that job or not and etc... Anyway I want to get various experience and get a job I want.

강사 첨삭

It seems like it\'s really difficult to be employed there in your country [이름].

I hope you will be able to get a job this year. Good luck to you.

See you on Monday.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


I would like to get a job in this year.

>>> Correct!

It is hard to get a job in Korean.

>>> Correct!

So many young people who graduate student build qualification for a job.

>>> So many young people who graduated from university try to study more to be qualified for a job.

There are so many qualification for a job.

>>> There are so many qualifications needed for a job.

Many company want me to have ability of technique, English or language of anther country, experience whether there is relation to that job or not and etc... Anyway I want to get various experience and get a job I want.

>>> Many companies want to hire applicants who are good at foreign languages, who have experiences related to the job they\'re applying to etc. Anyway, I want to acquire more experience and get a job that I want.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·