Homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It seems like it\'s really difficult to be employed there in your country [이름].
I hope you will be able to get a job this year. Good luck to you.
See you on Monday.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I would like to get a job in this year.
>>> Correct!
It is hard to get a job in Korean.
>>> Correct!
So many young people who graduate student build qualification for a job.
>>> So many young people who graduated from university try to study more to be qualified for a job.
There are so many qualification for a job.
>>> There are so many qualifications needed for a job.
Many company want me to have ability of technique, English or language of anther country, experience whether there is relation to that job or not and etc... Anyway I want to get various experience and get a job I want.
>>> Many companies want to hire applicants who are good at foreign languages, who have experiences related to the job they\'re applying to etc. Anyway, I want to acquire more experience and get a job that I want.
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