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2017-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Do you pay much attention to what you eat? Yes,i am interested the thing that i eat. I have allergy and my kids have atopy. We try not to have hamburger,ramen,junk food. if we can don't eat restaurant. we eat food that i cook.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!
Thank you for doing your homework. Anyway, I understand your situation because I am also allergic to some food, that\'s why I tend to be careful with that I also eat.
~Kelly^^
Do you pay much attention to what you eat?
Yes,i am interested the thing that i eat.
>> Yes, I am conscious in what I eat.
I have allergy and my kids have atopy.
>> Did you mean: I have an allergy and my kids have atopic dermatitis.
We try not to have hamburger,ramen,junk food.
>> We try not to have a hamburger, ramen, and junk foods.
if we can don\'t eat restaurant. we eat food that i cook.
>> If we don\'t eat at restaurants, we eat what I cook.

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