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2017-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Working on friday was disaster cuz it was super busy. basically it`s shame i`m leaving after 4months from my restaurant.. if that possible, i wish i could work more than 4months. The restaurant has a deeper meaning to me who works. i learned english from my co-workers like slang,expression and something nuance that can`t learn in somewhere also pronunciation. if i go back to korea ,i`ll definitely miss them and i promissed my co-workers to call a facetime sometimes . 1.The firm uses white bricks to build the hall. The hall is used white bricks to bulid the firm 2.You must not cross the road now. The road must be not crossed now 3.They were cooking the dinner at 7 o'clock. The dinner was cooked by them at 7 o`clock 4.Mr. [Name] will inform Derek. Derek will be informed by Mr.black. 5.El Greco painted this picture. This picture was painted by El Greco 6.They are knocking down the old school. The old school is knocked down by them 7.Has anyone switched on the light? was swiched on t

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] !^^

Goo evening! ^^


Happy Monday!:)

I hope you were able to enjoy the weekend. :)

Who would have thought that you were able to stay and survive in a foreign country

like Australia? :) And time is really passing fast so I hope you will use the most of your time left in

the down under. :)

Thank you for going over this activity.

This can be a good practice for you if we don\'t have class.

Please go over the corrections.


Teacher Glenda




Working on friday was disaster cuz it was super busy. 

>> Working last Friday was a disaster because it was super busy.

basically it`s shame i`m leaving after 4months from my restaurant..

>>It`s a shame that I will be leaving from my restaurant after 4months.

if that possible, i wish i could work more than 4months. .

>> If it\'s possible, I would want to work more than 4 months.

The restaurant has a deeper meaning to me who works.

>>  The restaurant has a sentimental value to me.

i learned english from my co-workers like slang,expression and something nuance that can`t learn in somewhere also pronunciation.

>> I learned English from my co-workers like slang expression, pronunciation and something nuance that I can`t learn somewhere else.  

if i go back to korea ,i`ll definitely miss them and i promissed my co-workers to call a facetime sometimes . 


>> If I go back to Korea, I`ll definitely miss them and I promised my co-workers to call on Face time sometimes. 


 1.The firm uses white bricks to build the hall.
The hall is used white bricks to bulid the firm

>> White bricks are used to build the hall.


 2.You must not cross the road now.
The road must be not crossed now 

>> The road must not be crossed now.



 3.They were cooking the dinner at 7 o\'clock.
The dinner was cooked by them at 7 o`clock

>> The dinner was being cooked at 7 o\'clock.


 4.Mr. [Name] will inform Derek.
Derek will be informed by Mr.black.

>> Correct


 5.El Greco painted this picture.
This picture was painted by El Greco

>> Correct


 6.They are knocking down the old school.
The old school is knocked down by them 

>> Correct


 7.Has anyone switched on the light?
was swiched on t

>> Bicycles may be left in the schoolyard.


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