Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] !^^
Goo evening! ^^
Happy Monday!:)
I hope you were able to enjoy the weekend. :)
Who would have thought that you were able to stay and survive in a foreign country
like Australia? :) And time is really passing fast so I hope you will use the most of your time left in
the down under. :)
Thank you for going over this activity.
This can be a good practice for you if we don\'t have class.
Please go over the corrections.
Teacher Glenda
Working on friday was disaster cuz it was super busy.
>> Working last Friday was a disaster because it was super busy.
basically it`s shame i`m leaving after 4months from my restaurant..
>>It`s a shame that I will be leaving from my restaurant after 4months.
if that possible, i wish i could work more than 4months. .
>> If it\'s possible, I would want to work more than 4 months.
The restaurant has a deeper meaning to me who works.
>> The restaurant has a sentimental value to me.
i learned english from my co-workers like slang,expression and something nuance that can`t learn in somewhere also pronunciation.
>> I learned English from my co-workers like slang expression, pronunciation and something nuance that I can`t learn somewhere else.
if i go back to korea ,i`ll definitely miss them and i promissed my co-workers to call a facetime sometimes .
>> If I go back to Korea, I`ll definitely miss them and I promised my co-workers to call on Face time sometimes.
1.The firm uses white bricks to build the hall.
The hall is used white bricks to bulid the firm
>> White bricks are used to build the hall.
2.You must not cross the road now.
The road must be not crossed now
>> The road must not be crossed now.
3.They were cooking the dinner at 7 o\'clock.
The dinner was cooked by them at 7 o`clock
>> The dinner was being cooked at 7 o\'clock.
4.Mr. [Name] will inform Derek.
Derek will be informed by Mr.black.
>> Correct
5.El Greco painted this picture.
This picture was painted by El Greco
>> Correct
6.They are knocking down the old school.
The old school is knocked down by them
>> Correct
7.Has anyone switched on the light?
was swiched on t
>> Bicycles may be left in the schoolyard.
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