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2017-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

When your heart is in your mouth, what do you do? ==> When my heart is in my mouth, I will take a deep breath. For example, if I have to present my report to my big boss, I will be very nervous. I cannot avoid this situation, because I am the team leader. I like this sentence, "if you can't avoid, enjoy it." So I will try to change my mind, "it is not difficult, nervous thing. It is funny and interesting thing." Sometimes that kind of mind makes me comfortable, so I can present easily. Anyway I will find some solution, when my heart is in my mouth. Breathe deeply, think again, check the reason, and find some solution,

강사 첨삭

Way to go, James!

I think you truly had enough rest. You\'re thinking straight now. Also, look at the \"correct\" marks below. You are amazing!

Thank you for making my day bright.

Where are you now?

I bet you are having some quality time with your gorgeous wife. Have fun!

Tell me about it tomorrow.

Until then!

-Klein-

When your heart is in your mouth, what do you do?
 ==> 
When my heart is in my mouth, I will take a deep breath.
>>Correct

For example, if I have to present my report to my big boss, I will be very nervous.
>>Correct

I cannot avoid this situation, because I am the team leader.
>>Correct

I like this sentence, \"if you can\'t avoid, enjoy it.\" 
>>Correct

So I will try to change my mind, \"it is not difficult, nervous thing. It is funny and interesting thing.\"
>>So I will try to change my mind, \"It is not difficult, but it makes me nervous. It is a funny and interesting thing.\"

Sometimes that kind of mind makes me comfortable, so I can present easily.
>>Correct
Anyway I will find some solution, when my heart is in my mouth.
>>Correct

Breathe deeply, think again, check the reason, and find some solution,

>>Correct!

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