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2017-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

학생이 쓴 원문

*You ara not allowed smoking on the airplane. * I couldn not help laughing when he tripped. *i enjoy going to clubs. *she expected people to help her. but she never helps anyone. *My docter advised me to quit smoking. Hi kathy ! of course. i never quit to study english with you. Thanks for your advised me.

강사 첨삭

Good day!
I do appreciate you sending your answer to me. Hats off to you! Congratulation. Keep up the good work! ^^
~~ Teacher Kathy
Here are my corrections for you:
* You are not allowed smoking on the airplane.
>> You are not allowed to smoke on the airplane.
* I couldn\'t help laughing when he tripped. 
>> Correct!
* I enjoy going to clubs. 
>> Correct!
* She expects people to help her, but she never helps anyone!
>> Correct!
* My doctor advised me to quit smoking.
>> Correct!
Hi kathy ! of course. i never quit to study english with you. Thanks for your advised me.
>> Hello Kathy. Of course, I will never quit studying English with you. Thank you for your advice.


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