Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
You must be very excited to go back home and just rest.
Forget all the stresses form work and just relax. :)
I fell you. :D
Thank you so much for sharing your ideas and please go over the corrections.
Be aware of the capitalizations of some nouns. ;)
Teacher Glenda
Hello~ It\'s always good to read the english tips you share
>> Correct [English- it should always be in capital letter.]
I appreciate that you fixed about my writing consistently. i read the english tips and your comments you gave me well !
>> I appreciate that you consistently correct my writing. I read the English tips and your comments you gave me.
I didn`t know i was able stay too long like this in Australia
>> I didn\'t know that I was able to stay in Australia this long.
So now i wanna go my real house. obviously it`s time to go back to korea
>> So now I want to go to my real house and obviously it\'s time for me to go back to Korea.
I have just 4months left before going back
>> I only have 4 months left before going back.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following:
Where do you want to go right now? and Why?
Right now? of course i can say Korea! haha the second place i want to go is bali cuz i already booked the ticket and i can`t wait going to there
also i heard that the bali food is really nice and beautiful beaches
>> Right now? Of course, I will say Korea! The second place I want to go to is Bali. I already booked the ticket and I can\'t wait to go there. I also heard that the food in Bali is really nice and they have beautiful beaches.
My co-worker from bali said \"[이름] if you go to the bali , you should eat a masirorang ! you remember i cooked for everyone??? compare between my food and bali masirorang and let me know how taste is \"
>> My co-worker fro Bali said, \'[이름], if you go to Bali, you should eat Masirorang! You remembered the one I cooked for everyone? Compare it with Bali Masirorang and let me know how it taste like.\'
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