homework
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What's the most beautiful place you've ever been to?
Most beautiful place is Israel.
There is home of jesus and the background of the bible.
The lake of galilee was impressive.
It was like the sea,and peter remember it.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ma\'am Sylvia!
Thank you for sharing your favorite place. I hope you could visit there again, soon.
~Kelly.
What\'s the most beautiful place you\'ve ever been to?
Most beautiful place is Israel.
>> The most beautiful place for me is Israel.
There is home of jesus and the background of the bible.
>> It was the home of Jesus and it was mentioned in the Bible.
The lake of galilee was impressive.
>> The lake of Galilee was impressive.
It was like the sea,and peter remember it.
>> It was like a sea and Peter remembered it.
Thank you for sharing your favorite place. I hope you could visit there again, soon.
~Kelly.
What\'s the most beautiful place you\'ve ever been to?
Most beautiful place is Israel.
>> The most beautiful place for me is Israel.
There is home of jesus and the background of the bible.
>> It was the home of Jesus and it was mentioned in the Bible.
The lake of galilee was impressive.
>> The lake of Galilee was impressive.
It was like the sea,and peter remember it.
>> It was like a sea and Peter remembered it.
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