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The most important thing is trying your best. I know your can really learn from our daily activities. Be confident in speaking English because you can see yourself speaking the language well in days to come.

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Talk to you tomorrow and always be positive.

T. Jeny

Where is the most amazing place you have been?

I traveled many cities in the world.

>>I traveled many cities around the world.

When I read the question first, it hit me lots of places included beautiful nature scenes and historical places.

>>When I first read the question, I thought of many places with beautiful nature scenes and historical places.

Among those places, there is a place where I still remember vividly.

>>correct

It is Tower Bridge in London.

>>It is the Tower Bridge in London.
 When I went there first, it was night.

>>When I went there for the first time, it was night.

>>It was night time when I went there for the first time.

 I heard that beauty of Tower Bridge many times before visiting the place.

>> I heard about the beauty of the Tower Bridge many times before visiting the place.

 However, the place was much more beautiful than I heard and expected. It was a literally breath-taking scene.

>>correct

 I felt weak at the knees.

>>My knees were quite weak.

There was an atmosphere of romantic and many people enjoy a night view of the Thames.

>>There was a romantic atmosphere where many people enjoy the night view of the Thames.

Everything in there was like a scene of a film or a dream.

>>Everything in there was like a scene from a film or a dream.
 I would like to recommend people around me to visit Tower Bridge.

>>correct