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Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!^^
Thank you for sharing your goals in life. I really hope that you can achieve all your dreams in life.^^
Have a fabulous day!
~Kelly^^
What is your biggest goal in life?
1. Something that i conversation with foreigners by English.
>> My goal is to be able to communication with foreigners in English.
2. Keep my health.
>> I also want to keep my health.
>> I want to keep my body fit and healthy.
3. Live happily with my husband.
>> It is also my goal to live happily with my husband.
4. Keep my job and enjoy.
>> I want to keep my job and enjoy it.
5. Look my kids live happily.
>> It will be my pride to see my kids live happily.
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