Homework

2017-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

학생이 쓴 원문

* Which is better, to be handsome or intelligent? Please explain your answer. I prefer to be handsome. People think that the intelligent men will be handsome. If I am handsome, people would think I am intelligent too. * Give at least three reasons why children need to go to school? 1. They make friends and play with them. 2. They learn to do things together. 3. They get important knowledge and skills for future job.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

You have been consistent in answering your homework. Thank you.
I like how you expanded your answers because they made your ideas very clear.
Keep up the good work!

See you tonight!

Teacher Amanda:)

* Which is better, to be handsome or intelligent? Please explain your answer.
I prefer to be handsome.
>> Correct
>> OR: For me, being handsome is better than being intelligent.

People think that the intelligent men will be handsome.
>>People think that intelligent men are handsome.

If I am handsome, people would think I am intelligent too.
>> If I am handsome, people would think that I am intelligent too.

* Give at least three reasons why children need to go to school?

1. They make friends and play with them.
>> Correct
2. They learn to do things together.
>> Correct
3. They get important knowledge and skills for future job.
>> They gain important knowledge and skills to secure their future.

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