homework
학생이 쓴 원문
*tom was told many times to stop talking in class. *he was disappointed by the movie. *he was convinced by histher to go to the beach. *the present was given to her by her co walker. *the thief was catched by the police.
*my son took the my earphone.
so i used other earphone. i didnot listen well. i am sorry. kathy.
*i am going to go to new zealand and australia from next monday to next next wednesday. i hope i could speak a word of english.
강사 첨삭
A blissful day to you!
Thank you for doing your homework. I understand that your son took your earphone. Now worries my dear, I will make my voice louder so you can hear me better, okay?
WOW! ^^ I will try to teach you some basic words and sentences that can help you communicate with people in New Zealand and Australia.
By the way, you almost got a perfect score. Keep up the good job!
~~ Teacher Kathy ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
*Tom was told many times to stop talking in class.
>> Correct!
*He was disappointed by the movie.
>> Correct!
*He was convinced by his brother to go to the beach.
>> Correct!
*The present was given to her by her co walker.
>> Correct!
*The thief was catched by the police.
>> The thief was caught by the police.
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