Homework

You must have had a lot of fun there MISS [이름]!

I hope to hear more about your experience in class.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

Write about the most exciting experience you ever had.

When I went to universal studio in Osaka.

>>> My most exciting experience was when I went to Universal Studio in Osaka. 
 It is not that big but it has lots of fun rides.

>>> Correct!
 Especailly, Harry Potter.

>>> Harry Potter is the most interesting one.

 It is a 4d ride.

>>> Correct!

I felt that I was the charactor in the movie.

>>> I felt like I was a character in the movie.

I want to take it one more time.

>>> Correct!
 Nowadays, they made a Minions ride but there were
a lot of people to wait for riding.

>>> Nowadays, they made a Minions\' ride but5 there were a lot of people waiting to take the ride.

Next time, I want to take it.

>>> Correct!