Homework

2017-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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7/28 Write an essay about a situation when you got really angry at someone. Include the reason / reasons and the thing/ things you did to release your anger. when other people use my things, I get angry. The reason why I am angry, they don't put the thing where it was placed. I get mor mad because they don't change their behavior what I ask a favor to them.

강사 첨삭

I understand where you\'re coming from MISS [이름]!

I am quite used to people like that because I live with them. Hahaha!

Anyway, have a great day and see you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


7/28
Write an essay about a situation when you got really angry at someone. Include the reason / reasons and the thing/ things you did to release your anger.


when other people use my things, I get angry.

>>> Correct! [When]
The reason why I am angry, they don\'t put the thing where it was placed.

>>> The reason why I get angry is they don\'t put back the things to their proper places.

I get mor mad because they don\'t change their behavior what I ask a favor to them.

>>> I get angrier because they don\'t change their behavior even when they ask them to.

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