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When I visited a photo studio a couple of months ago, I witnessed that a young man's ID picture was being photoshopped and altered.
With our modern technology way developed, news channels like CNN using a lot of videos and photographs when telling the news.
As mentioned above, it is not that difficult for experts to photoshop them and affect our knowledge of the true news.
In fact, they can fill the TV screen with just ten people and manipulate it as if a huge crowd is going on a strike out there.
As for newspapers, manipulating by photoshopping pictures is much easier compared to TV.
Every newspaper publishing company has its unique fixed opinion and political view.
They try to keep pursuing it by obscuring or brightening something on purpose.
Generally, we've come to expect that photographs reveal the truth of events, but we have to remember that pictures and even videos can be severely changed and manipulated.
Having said that, how could we read a newspaper without pictures in it?
Newspapers should use photographs to make pages more attractive, to tell the news more clearly and to let readers know what people, places and things look like.
Therefore, the importance of pictures in newspapers cannot be too emphasized.
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Hello Mr. [이름],
Thank you for telling me your opinion about our topic.
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
When I visited a photo studio a couple of months ago, I witnessed that a young man\'s ID picture was being photoshopped and altered.
>> CORRECT
With our modern technology way developed, news channels like CNN using a lot of videos and photographs when telling the news.
With our modern technology way developed, news channels like CNN using a lot of videos and photographs when telling the news.
>> CORRECT
As mentioned above, it is not that difficult for experts to photoshop them and affect our knowledge of the true news.
As mentioned above, it is not that difficult for experts to photoshop them and affect our knowledge of the true news.
>> CORRECT
In fact, they can fill the TV screen with just ten people and manipulate it as if a huge crowd is going on a strike out there.
In fact, they can fill the TV screen with just ten people and manipulate it as if a huge crowd is going on a strike out there.
>> CORRECT
As for newspapers, manipulating by photoshopping pictures is much easier compared to TV.
As for newspapers, manipulating by photoshopping pictures is much easier compared to TV.
>> CORRECT
Every newspaper publishing company has its unique fixed opinion and political view.
Every newspaper publishing company has its unique fixed opinion and political view.
>> CORRECT
They try to keep pursuing it by obscuring or brightening something on purpose.
They try to keep pursuing it by obscuring or brightening something on purpose.
>> CORRECT
Generally, we\'ve come to expect that photographs reveal the truth of events, but we have to remember that pictures and even videos can be severely changed and manipulated.
Generally, we\'ve come to expect that photographs reveal the truth of events, but we have to remember that pictures and even videos can be severely changed and manipulated.
>> CORRECT
Having said that, how could we read a newspaper without pictures in it?
Having said that, how could we read a newspaper without pictures in it?
>> CORRECT
Newspapers should use photographs to make pages more attractive, to tell the news more clearly and to let readers know what people, places and things look like.
Newspapers should use photographs to make pages more attractive, to tell the news more clearly and to let readers know what people, places and things look like.
>> CORRECT
Therefore, the importance of pictures in newspapers cannot be too emphasized.
Therefore, the importance of pictures in newspapers cannot be too emphasized.
>> CORRECT
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