homework
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What was the most expensive purchase you made? Why did you buy it?
I was putchase to goose down longcoat.
I got cold in the winter,and the coat disign was pretty.
It was lighting,keep warm,prevent the wind.
In korea, goose made of jaket(coat) was popular.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!
Thank you for your homework. Your coat must be comfy and stylish.^ I think, that\'s a good investment because it keeps you warm in winter season.^
~Kelly^^
What was the most expensive purchase you made? Why did you buy it?
I was putchase to goose down longcoat.
>> Did you mean: I purchased a goose trench coat.
I got cold in the winter,and the coat disign was pretty.
>> I feel cold in winter, and the coat\'s design was pretty.
It was lighting,keep warm,prevent the wind.
>> It was light and warm to the body.
In korea, goose made of jaket(coat) was popular.
>> In Korea, coats made of goose is popular.
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