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Thank you for sharing the most expensive items which you bought. Anyway, good job on your homework. Keep it up!
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What was the most expensive purchase you made? Why did you buy it? Answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
First,I bought Lego when I was 9 years old.
>> The first item which I bought when I was 9 years old was Lego.
The price is 16 millions.
>> Its price is 16 million Won.
I love Lego because I like to make some to Lego then.
>> I love Legos because I liked to assemble Legos back then.
But now, I lost my few Lego parts.
>> Correct.
So, I don\'t play Lego now.
>> So, I don\'t play Lego nowadays.
Second, I bought my phone last month.
>> The second item which I bought last month was a phone.
I don\'t remember my phone\'s price.
>> Correct.
I bought phone because I need to phone.
>> I bought my phone because I need it.
I can play a games or phone call.
>> I can play a games and make phone calls.
So, I think cell phone do a good job for me.
>> So, I think a cell phone is very helpful for me.
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