Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Good afternoon ^^
I can see that you have been having the most of your remaining time in Sydney and
at your work. :)
I hope that everything will work out well with you as you go back to Korea after a few months.
Thank you for going over this homework.
T. Glenda
Hello~ it wasn`t busier than i thought on saturday night
>> It wasn\'t as bust as I thought last Saturday night.
I thought to be busy so i prepared all ingredients to my section from cool room (refrigerator).
>> I thought it will be busy so I prepared all ingredients on my section from the cool room.
but there were a little of customer who came our restaurant. so i had to put them back.
>> but there were just few customers who came to our restaurant. So I had to put them back.
and i just cut and filled each container with ingrediants. then i helped the other co-workers jobs
>> I just cut the ingredients and filled each containers with it, then I helped my co-workers with their job.
I always felt time is going to be fast when i worked there.
>> I always feel that time is running fast when I work there.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
In no less than 5 sentences, state your opinion on this saying:
If wealth is lost, nothing is lost.
I think if wealth is lost , you can start all over again and can stand up
>> Correct
If health is lost, something is lost.
>> Correct
But if health is lost everything`ll lost my parents always say\" health is the best . you should be health and you can do everything \"
>> But if health is lost, everything will be lost. My parents always told me, \"Health is the best, so you should be healthy and you can do everything.
If character is lost, everything is lost.
>> Correct
If character is lost you can set up again to a new character
>> Correct
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