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2017-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I would violate the law to save someone dear to me as long as it doesn't include murdering someone. We violate small laws all the time. We download movies and songs illegally and we go to some places we're not allowed to go. S I I don't see a reason to violate some laws if it means I can save a innocent person.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

You\'ve got a point there.

If it would also happen to me, I might violate some laws to save a family or friend.

However, it depends on the law. C\")

Anyway, see you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

I would violate the law to save someone dear to me as long as it doesn\'t include murdering someone.

>>> Correct!

We violate small laws all the time.

>>> Correct!

We download movies and songs illegally and we go to some places we\'re not allowed to go.

>>> Correct!

S I I don\'t see a reason to violate some laws if it means I can save a innocent person.

>>> So I don\'t see any reason not to violate some laws if it means I can save an innocent person.

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