homework

2017-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

What's the most interesting part of your place? most interesting part of my plase is a table in the kitchen. my famliy is sitting around a table and is studying. each other room have a desk. i do kitchen,my daugther do the homework,my son.drawing picture. so,a table is dirty. every time my family eats,i clean it. our table is interesthing place.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!^^

That table must be priceless because it\'s already part of your daily activities. Create more wonderful memories with your family. :)

Have a beautiful day!

~Kelly^^

What\'s the most interesting part of your place?
most interesting part of my plase is a table in the kitchen.

>> The most interesting part of my place is the table in my kitchen.
my famliy is sitting around a table and is studying.

>> My family sits around the table and study.
each other room have a desk.

>> Each room in my house has a desk.
 i do kitchen,my daugther do the homework,my son.drawing picture.

>> While working in the kitchen, my daughter is doing her homework and my son is drawing a picture.
so,a table is dirty.

>> So, the table is messy.
every time my family eats,i clean it.

>> Every time my family eats, I clean it.
our table is interesthing place.

>> Our table is an interesting part of our place.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·