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2017-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Tell me a story that is one for the books. ==> As you know, I like playing golf and my wife started the playing golf. I don't have time to go a country club so I sometimes go to a screen golf. In general, my golf score is not good and my average golf score is 90. Also my wife's average golf score is 110. But a few weeks ago, I went to a screen golf club with my wife. At that time, maybe my condition was very good, so I played well and my wife also did well. After screen golf game, I surprised because of my golf score including my wife's score. My score was 68 and my wife's score was 101. It was first time I did under play. When a golf player's score is 72, we call it EVEN. If a golf player's score is below 72, we call it Under. It was amazing score to me. Also my wife reduced her score. Anyway that day was one for the books for us.

강사 첨삭

This is delightful, James!

Thanks for sharing this wonderful news. Please extend my regards to your wife.

Keep it up! This applies here as well, my friend. You sure are making so many great sentences. Thanks for making me happy.

This is, let me borrow your word, amazing!

May you continue to have a wonderful time!

-Klein

Tell me a story that is one for the books.
 ==>
 As you know, I like playing golf and my wife started the playing golf.
>>As you know, I like playing golf and my wife started playing it, too.

I don\'t have time to go a country club so I sometimes go to a screen golf.

>>Correct
 In general, my golf score is not good and my average golf score is 90.
 
>>Correct

Also my wife\'s average golf score is 110.
 
>>Correct

But a few weeks ago, I went to a screen golf club with my wife.
 
>>Correct

At that time, maybe my condition was very good, so I played well and my wife also did well.
 
>>Correct

After screen golf game, I surprised because of my golf score including my wife\'s score.
 
>>After the screen golf game, I was surprised by my golf score and my wife\'s.

My score was 68 and my wife\'s score was 101. 
>>My score was 68, while my wife\'s was 101.

It was first time I did under play.
 
>>It was the first time I did the under play.

When a golf player\'s score is 72, we call it EVEN.
 
>>Correct

If a golf player\'s score is below 72, we call it Under.
 
>>Correct

It was amazing score to me.
 
>>It was an amazing score to me.

Also my wife reduced her score.
 
>>Correct

Anyway that day was one for the books for us.

>>Correct

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