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강사 첨삭
Hey Smart Kid! How are you?
Your answer made me smile.
You mentioned before that you love the color blue, but I would\'ve never imagine you to like it for your hair.
I like your answer though. It shows how incredibly unique you are.
You are still young but you already know what you want.
See you tonight!
T. Amanda :)
I would change my hair color blue.
>> I would change my hair color to blue.
>> OR: If I had to change my hair color, I will change it to blue.
Blue is my favorite color.
>> Correct
It look cool.
>> It looks cool.
People usually don\'t have bule hair,so they will think I am special.
>> People usually don\'t have blue hair, so they will think that I am special.
>> OR: You seldom see people with a blue hair color, so if I\'ll make mine blue, they will think that I am artistic.
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