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Is deception ever justified?
I think deception can be justified sometimes. There is a word white lie and deception which can be justified would be similar with white lie. In my opinion, the basic factor for justifying deception is a good intention. For example, if I die today and there is a miserable and sad news about my family or friend, maybe I would not want to know the truth about how my people are facing with serious problems. In that situation, I can't do anything for them and only end my life with full of sadness and worries. If someone lies to me about the situation and make me die peacefully, it would be better for me than knowing the truth. I also know this is a very extreme example. I think generally just being honest is the best answer to choose in most of cases. I just want to leave the possibility which lying is better than telling truth.
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Hi, [이름]!
I heard the yellow dust in your country is pretty bad.
I hope you\'re doing okay.
Thank you for giving out your opinion about this matter.
I also think deception is only acceptable in extreme cases and I agree to what you\'ve mentioned earlier that telling the truth is still the best option in most cases.
I guess, there is still an exception to the rule.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you again tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher Charry
I think deception can be justified sometimes. >> CORRECT!
OR >> In my opinion, deception can be justifiable at times.
There is a word white lie and deception which can be justified would be similar with white lie.
>> There is what we call a white lie and deception which can be justified would be similar with a white lie.
In my opinion, the basic factor for justifying deception is a good intention.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> To me, the basic factor for justifying deception is because of a good intention.
For example, if I die today and there is a miserable and sad news about my family or friend, maybe I would not want to know the truth about how my people are facing with serious problems.
>> For example, if I am about to die today and there is a miserable and sad news about my family or friend, maybe I would not want to know the truth about how the people I care about who are facing serious problems.
In that situation, I can\'t do anything for them and only end my life with full of sadness and worries.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In that instance, I can\'t do anything for them and only end my life full of sadness and worries.
If someone lies to me about the situation and make me die peacefully, it would be better for me than knowing the truth.
>> If someone lies to me about the situation and lets me die peacefully, it would be better for me than knowing the truth.
I also know this is a very extreme example.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am also aware that this is a very extreme example.
I think generally just being honest is the best answer to choose in most of cases.
>> I think generally, being honest is the best option inmost cases.
I just want to leave the possibility which lying is better than telling truth.
>> I just want to leave the possibility where lying is better than telling truth.
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