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2017-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I like fruits and I like ice-cream. 2. My sister has curly hair but I have straight hair. 3. My grandfather is strict but He is kind. 4. My house is small but My brother’s house is large. 5. The bird made a nest and She laid her eggs in it. 6. Mini is tall but Her sister is not tall. 7. She is famous but She is not happy. 8. Meena is intelligent but She is careless. 9. My sister writes a beautiful hand but My handwriting is barely legible. 10. I worked hard but I didn’t pass my test.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]

I know that there are unexpected circumstances that could happen along the way.

It is a great thing that you are more expressive of your feelings now, it means that you are starting to feel comfortable in using the English language.

T. Jeny

1. I like fruits and I like ice-cream.

>> I like fruits and ice-cream.
2. My sister has curly hair but I have straight hair.

>>correct
3. My grandfather is strict but He is kind.

>>correct
4. My house is small but My brother’s house is large.

>>correct
5. The bird made a nest and She laid her eggs in it.

>>The bird made a nest and laid her eggs in it.
6. Mini is tall but Her sister is not tall.

>>correct
7. She is famous but She is not happy.

>>correct
8. Meena is intelligent but She is careless.

>>correct
9. My sister writes a beautiful hand but My handwriting is barely legible.

>>correct
10. I worked hard but I didn’t pass my test.

>>correct

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