homework
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HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: The brain is an organ that serves as the center of the nervous system. It is one of the most complex and magnificent organs in the human body. What is the most amazing thing about the brain? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^
The most amazing thing about the brain is that the brain controls all of our senses.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! (^_^)
You are right. The brain is like the control room of the body.
It\'s too complicated yet it\'s one of the most important body organs.
Thank you for answering your homework.
See you again tomorrow!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
The most amazing thing about the brain is that the brain controls all of our senses.
>> CORRECT!
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