homework
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What problems do people with disabilities face in your country?
First,edication about problem.
They don't go to the school near at home.
There was no inclusive education.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!^^
Thank you for sharing your opinion about problems that people with disabilities face in your country. I hope all these issues could be addressed so they could enjoy basic human rights and the right to education.
~Kelly^^
What problems do people with disabilities face in your country?
First,edication about problem.
>> Firstly, the problem is education.
They don\'t go to the school near at home.
>> They don\'t go to school near their home.
There was no inclusive education.
>> Correct.
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