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2017-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I was supposed to eat for lunch with my friends. But I was late for the appointment. so I sent the massage to her. “I’m so sorry. I will be late. you can have your lunch early. I will understand if you cannot wait for me.” I was waiting my husband at home. As soon as he came home, I went to go out. Despite the weekday, my husband took care my baby. We haven’t seen each other for a long time. I was very glad to see old friends after a long time. We parted, Promising to meet more often. I have been to Margaret River in Australia. This is the place Southern ocean and indian ocean two ocean meet. There are so many unfamiliar plants along the beach. These are looked different from Korea. We watched many colors of the sunset. We could see rainbow, heavy rain, sunset at same time. when we see the right side we could see rainbow, when we see the left side we could see heavy rain. The beauty of the scenery was beyond description.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

It\'s good to see your name here again. Anyway, I am glad that you finally met your friends after a long time. I hope you can keep in touch more often.^^ Have a fun hump day!

~Kelly^^

I was supposed to eat for lunch with my friends. 

>> I was supposed to eat lunch with my friends.  

>> I was supposed to have lunch with my friends.
But I was late for the appointment. so I sent the massage to her.

>> But I was late for the appointment, so I sent a message to one of my friends.
“I’m so sorry. I will be late. you can have your lunch early. 

>> I wrote - \"I’m so sorry. I will be late. You can have your lunch early. \"
I will understand if you cannot wait for me.”

>> \"I will understand if you cannot wait for me.\"
I was waiting my husband at home. As soon as he came home, I went to go out. 

>> I was waiting for my husband at home. As soon as he came home, I went out. 
Despite the weekday, my husband took care my baby. 

>> Despite his busy schedule during weekdays, my husband takes care of my baby.
We haven’t seen each other for a long time. 

>> Correct.
I was very glad to see old friends after a long time. 

>> Correct.
We parted, Promising to meet more often.
>> When we parted, we promised to meet more often.

I have been to Margaret River in Australia. 

>> Correct.
This is the place Southern ocean and indian ocean two ocean meet.

>> This place is located between the Southern Ocean and Indian Ocean. 
There are so many unfamiliar plants along the beach. 

>> Correct.
These are looked different from Korea. 

>> They looked different from the plants in Korea.
We watched many colors of the sunset.

>> Correct.
We could see rainbow, heavy rain, sunset at same time. 

>> While it was raining heavily, we could see the rainbow and the sunset at the same time.
when we see the right side we could see rainbow, when we see the left side we could see heavy rain.

>> When we looked at the right side, we could see the rainbow. On the left side, we could see the heavy rain.

The beauty of the scenery was beyond description.

>> Correct.


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