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Hi [이름]! ^^
Great evening! ^^
You must be very proud! ^^
That is good to hear, actually, it uplifts your soul if you
see people appreciate your hard work.
I hope your good vibes will continue all though out. :)
See you! ^^
Teacher Glenda
Hello ! yesterday was very peaceful so I cut a ingredient off slowly and chatted with co-workers
>> Hello ! yesterday was very peaceful so I cut off ingredients slowly and chatted with co-workers.
Meanwhile two customers came in our shop and they ordered 2salmon poke that I make.
>> Correct
As soon as I saw the docket , I started making the 2poke then I put them shelf that waiter take these food .
>> As soon as I saw the docket , I started making the 2poke then I put them on the shelf where waiter take the ready food .
we are in our shop open kitchen so sometimes I talk to customers and I can see the people who`s eating their food .
>> We have an open kitchen so sometimes I talk to customers and I can see the people who are eating their food .
the customers who received the 2poke I made look so happy and said \"wow awesome\" then few hours later they ate the whole each 2poke
>> The customers who received the 2poke I made, looked so happy and said \"wow awesome\" then few hours later they ate each of the whole poke
I couldn\'t`t see any leftover so I boasted my co-workers .
>> I couldn\'t`t see any leftover so I boasted to my co-workers .
I was like. \" hey fellows boys guys look at the that table who sitting two girls they ate the 2poke I made\"
>> I was like. \" hey fellows guys look at the that table where two girls are sitting, they ate the 2poke I made\"
1. Do you want some pork along with the chicken?
>> Correct
2 Don’t worry apart from me. Think about yourself.
>>Correct
3 Everyone came, save for Lek who had to work.
>> as for
4 Everyone was present, except for Mary. She stayed at home.
>> Correct
5 _Further to your letter, I have spoken to Mr. [Name].
>> Correct
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