homework
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Cyber-bullying is bullying that takes place using electronic technology.
In fact, just like any other victim of bullying, cyber-bullied kids experience anxiety, fear, depression, and low self-esteem.
These issues may persist into adulthood.
Depending upon what happens to the victim as a direct result of the bullying, criminal charges can also be brought.
[sources: stopbyllying, nobullying]
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There is a way for people to prevent cyberbullying and to teach prevention of cyber bullying.
>> CORRECT!
OR: There\'s a way to educate people about the effects of cyber-bullying.
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