homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Can you talk about a city you would like to visit?
Why do you like to go there?
I would like to visit Italiy.
I want to feel so the renaissance.
And,I wash see a catholic church,Museum.
Beat of all,it's a good place to take pictures.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!
I hope you could travel to Italy one of these days, so you can visit the beautiful places there. And, don\'t forget to take a lot of pictures. kkk
~Kelly^^
Can you talk about a city you would like to visit? Why do you like to go there?
I would like to visit Italiy.
>> I would like to visit Italy.
I want to feel so the renaissance.
>> I want to feel the Renaissance period.
And,I wash see a catholic church,Museum.
>> And, I want to see Catholic Churches and museums.
Beat of all,it\'s a good place to take pictures.
>> Best of all, it\'s a good place to take pictures.
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