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2017-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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My super power would be 'SPEAK-MADE'. Its effect is that if I say 'a house', a house will appear. And if I say 'disappear', A house will disappear. This power is strong the most. I want to have a grat super power. That is the reason why I want to have' SPEAKMADE'.

강사 첨삭


How are you doing this afternoon, Kiddo?

I like your answer. 

It made me want to wish that I have that kind of superpower. ^-^

Most of your sentences are also grammatically correct. Good job!


See you tonight!

Take Care!

T. Amanda:)


My super power would be \'SPEAK-MADE\'.

>> Correct

>> OR: If I could have a superpower, I would call it \"Speak-made\".


Its effect is that if I say \"a house\", a house will appear. And if I say \"disappear\", a house will disappear.

>> Correct

>> OR: It would have the power to make things appear and disappear.


 This power is strong the most. I want to have a grat super power.

>> This kind of power would be the strongest of all superpowers.


That is the reason why I want to have\' SPEAK-MADE\'.

>> Correct


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