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Are older people actually wiser?
>>correct
NO. I dont\' think so.
>>>>correct
Older people have many experience. so we have to respect them.
>>Older people have many experiences so we have to respect them.
but some people doesn\'t.
>>but some people don\'t.
They have ignore young people\'s opinion and dont\' listen to other young people.
>>They ignore young people\'s opinion and they don\'t listen to them.
sometimes young people have a wisedom.
>>Sometimes young people have wisdom.
so I think we should have a respect when we see another people regardless of age.
>>So I think we should respect other people when we see them regardless of age.
man have to be respected each other. age is not most important thing.
>>Man should respect each other. Age is not the most important thing.
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