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2017-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hello ~ yesterday was a tough day even though it was my day-off because to buy used Macbook. i and my glrilfriend had to go to a station that it`s far from our house But there was a problem while we were on the way to the station. the train was going the wrong route that`s my fault . i should`ve known the time and platform early We got off a weird station that i`ve never heard and we were trying to go back to the station However all of sudden my g.f said "[이름] i left my phone by my mistake on staion" And i tried to call her phone then fortunately someone receive and said "you lost your phone? i'll put your phone in next staion office and you come and get it you got it??" We found the phone and we were going through a lot to get back to the station Eventually i bought Macbook and now i`m wring this homework using my Macbook Of course why not it`s definitely appropriate. there are the men who are working a nurse and daycare teacher around you and also there are so

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Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Whoa! That was totally a rough day. :)

Well, it was good to know that even if it was a bit rough, 

everything went well at the end. :)

THank you for sharing. 


See you! 

Teacher Glenda   



Hello ~ yesterday was a tough day even though it was my day-off because to buy used Macbook.

>> Yesterday was a tough day even though it was my day-off because I had to buy a used MacBook.

i and my glrilfriend had to go to a station that it`s far from our house

>> My girlfriend and I had to go to a station that it`s far from our house.
 But there was a problem while we were on the way to the station.

>> Correct

the train was going the wrong route that`s my fault . 

>> We rode the wrong train in a wrong route  and it was my fault . 

  i should`ve known the time and platform early

>> I should`ve known the time and platform earlier.
 We got off a weird station that i`ve never heard and we were trying to go back to the station

>> We got off in a weird station that I`ve never seen or heard of and we were trying to go back to the station.
 However all of sudden my g.f said \"[이름] i left my phone by my mistake on staion\"

>> However, all of sudden my g.f said \"[이름] i left my phone by mistake at the station\"
 And i tried to call her phone then fortunately someone receive and said \"you lost your phone?

>> So I tried to calling her phone then fortunately someone answered it and said \"Have you lost your phone?
 i\'ll put your phone in next staion office and you come and get it you got it??\"

>> I\'ll put your phone at the next station\'s office and you come and get it, You got it??\"
 We found the phone and we were going through a lot to get back to the station

>> We found the phone and we were going through a lot to get back to the station.
 Eventually i bought Macbook and now i`m wring this homework using my Macbook
>> Eventually I bought the MacBook and now I\'m writing this homework using my MacBook.
Of course why not it`s definitely appropriate.

>> Of course, it`s definitely appropriate.

there are the men who are working a nurse and daycare teacher around you and also there are so

>> There are men who are working as a nurse and daycare teacher around you.

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